Business correspondence is really like any other type of writing: You need to get your message across clearly and efficiently. Here are five tips to help you write business correspondence effectively.
1. Set a goal. Before you put pen to paper (or hand to keyboard), take a few minutes to think about what you are trying to accomplish with your business correspondence. Are you making a proposal? Asking for a raise? Asking a coworker’s help on a project? Have that goal clearly in mind as you write. It will prevent going off on a tangent which could confuse the recipient.
It may help to write a brief outline before you start. No, it doesn’t have to be the formal outline that Mrs. Grundy taught you in high school English. This outline is just a guide to make sure you say everything you want to say in your correspondence.
2. Consider the recipient. Face it: we use different language when speaking to our coworkers than when speaking to the big boss or that important (potential) client. If you have a subtle sense of humor, be careful when using it in your business correspondence as the recipient might not necessarily get the joke. When in doubt, formal is better.
If your correspondence concerns negative news, many experts recommend beginning with positive news, followed by your politely worded bombshell, and then closing with positive news. Thank you for your many years of collaboration with our company. However, we are forced to severely cut back this year because of the tight economy. While we will not be able to use your services this year, we wish you the best of success and hope we can resume working with you once the economy improves.
3. Use simple sentence structure. If at all possible use active voice (i.e. noun-verb) rather than passive voice (verb-noun). Active voice makes for clear, direct writing. For example: Joe presented the report is far better than The report was presented by Joe. Keep adjectives and adverbs to a minimum.
4. Keep it short. No one has time to read a lengthy tome. For most correspondence, shorter is better. If you can keep it to one page, you are probably better off. If you find that you must go more than a page, consider breaking it up into sections (or multiple documents) or deleting some information.
5. Avoid jargon. Simple is best for business. Short, one-syllable words are usually far better than ten-dollar multisyllabic buzzwords.
Think about it: How often do your eyes glaze over when you see or hear the words: synergy, paradigm or win-win scenario? Your reader’s eyes will too. Such words as use rather than utilize are much stronger and clearer and will get your point across much more effectively.
When writing business documents, make sure to keep copies of your work, with dates and recipients appropriately noted. Unfortunately, in this day and age, a paper trail is important in case problems arise in the future.
Effective business correspondence can be easy to write if you remember to keep it simple.
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